Monday, 26 July 2010

Description is for Wimps

So said Aristotle. Naturally I'm paraphrasing, what he actually said was something like - the most beautiful colours, laid on confusedly, will not give as much pleasure as the chalk outline of a portrait.

By which he means, description is nothing without relevance to the story.

Like anything you wish to learn, the best way to do it is to break it down into smaller, component parts that are easier to digest and understand. We do this with writing, we break the novel down into baser elements – plot, character, dialogue, narrative, description, action, tension, exposition. We submit fractions of our prose to crit groups, to agents and editors – we polish and polish until our plots are complex, our characters fully-formed, our dialogue convincing, our narrative fluent, and our description evocative – and yet, something's missing.

Authority.

We must master these elements and when we are fluent in them, dismiss them at will, using only those parts that evoke, reveal and describe the story we wish to tell.

Craft is just the long road to Art. It's ok to tell rather than show sometimes. It's ok to summarise. A general description can have more resonance than six pages of artfully worked yet irrelevant detail. The tools of our craft should be our servants, not our masters.

The rules should set you free.

Wednesday, 21 July 2010

The Spaces In Between

Writers have a tendency to polarise – antagonist vs. protagonist, plot vs. pants, good vs. evil – it gives us easy handles to grasp in what can be a very esoteric and slippery pursuit. But although we need to know the extremes, it's the spectrum in between where the best fiction situates itself - memorable protagonists are flawed; interesting bad guys have a core humanity. Complexity adds depth and interest.

But subtlety require distinction not vagueness.

Here's a list of ideas that are often confused, but where knowing the difference could make all the difference.

Action vs. Drama

How often have you read a novel opening with an obvious attempt to engage the reader with an action packed sequence, but it completely misses the mark – we don't know the characters involved, we don't know what's at stake.

Good action scenes work because they are dramatic, not because they are action scenes. Action is just spectacle without drama, but drama does very well on its own. If you're wondering how some quiet openings can be so compelling, then it's very likely due to it.

Pleasure vs. Happiness

Just because they can co-exist, does not make them the same. Being high on heroine is very pleasant, but it won't lead to happiness. My grand-parent's generation had happy times during the Blitz, but it can't have been pleasant. You get the idea.

Scene vs. Situation

A situation with dramatic potential does not make a scene – a scene requires that something changes for the character or the story by the end of it. A lovingly detailed situation is just that, until it becomes a scene - make sure it becomes one.

Prudence vs. Prejudice

Is it prudence or prejudice that makes the shop-owner keep his eye on those lads in hoodies by the sweet-counter. Is it ageism or common sense that makes us give the elderly driver a wide berth. Be aware that the character you think is being smart, maybe actually coming across as a bigot.

Love vs. Lust

Can't really avoid this one, and too obvious to need explaining. I hope. Often depicted as two very distinct things, but there's always a little bit of one in the other – how much is down to you.

Are there any other distinctions you think it's essential for a writer to make?

Friday, 16 July 2010

How to write all the time – Part 2

Think it's impossible to write when you're at work, driving, at a funeral, or even asleep? Think again. Observation and Invention can be done at any time, recording the results is trickier but not impossible. We've talked about this in the past, and will again, but for now, here are more tips on getting through the days without losing your sense of self.

Writing when driving

  • If you've been capturing ideas when you have a moment and a hand free, then you should already have a heap of questions about your WIP to ruminate over. Now's the time to do it.

  • Being stuck in a traffic jam couldn't be more mind-numbing, right? Take a look at your fellow drivers - what are they wearing, where are they going. Invent lives and backgrounds for them.

  • The world is all around and you've got nothing better to do than look at it – make ten observations that strike you about what you see, then make ten more – it's likely the latter will be the more unusual and unique.

  • Your drive to work is so demanding you can't look at anywhere other than the road? Slam an audio book into the cd player – listening to someone else's stories may help inspire your own.

  • Feel the road-rage – yep, it's a genuine emotion, and therefore material – embrace it.

Writing at work

  • Got a great idea when you should be crunching that spreadsheet? Send yourself an email to your home address, if that's not an option, make an urgent call to your mobile voice-mail as you step out of the office and leave yourself a message.

  • Look at your boss and your co-workers – see who has the status, who's stifling their ambition? What are people really thinking? Imagine how the status would change in a different situation, who would be the real leaders. Who fancies who? Who hates who? There's all sorts bubbling under the surface – try to figure it out.

  • Use your lunchbreak to write – there's nothing like being right amongst the alternative to a writing career to inspire you to get some words down.

  • Learn shorthand – no one will have any idea you're not actually writing up the meeting minutes when in fact you're nailing chapter 15.

Writing at a family event

  • So you have a fifteen hour drive to cousin Nigel's wedding who you last saw when he was his mother's bump? Look around the congregation, try and figure out if anyone there has slept with the bride or groom – what are they thinking? Is there anybody there who would like to sleep with them? Perhaps you do? Perhaps you already have.

  • Ask and listen – Uncle Bob may tell you about his experience as a Bomber pilot during the war. Auntie Jude may tell you who slept with the bride last week. Cousin Kevin may reveal his drug addiction. The human race is your subject, and there's nothing like a wedding or a funeral for a compelling mix of people with a whole heap of emotional baggage and back-ground. Things are bound to kick-off.

Writing when you're asleep

  • Dreams – the one time when you can guarantee that your internal editor isn't around to spoil things – sex, violence, nightmares, characters, dead people – things you couldn't possibly imagine yourself imagining happen in dreams. Start keeping a dream journal, because like all good ideas, they will be forgotten.

There is really no excuse. Writing can be just a hobby, but it can also be a way of life.

Friday, 9 July 2010

12 Ways to a Better Submission Pack

You've got three weapons at your disposal - your letter, your synopsis, and your sample chapters. They can't just be good, they have to be excellent.

Your covering letter needs to make the editor want to read your synopsis, the synopsis needs to make them want to read your sample chapters, and the sample chapters need to make them request the full manuscript. Here are some resources to help you do that.

Your Covering Letter

Your Synopsis

Your Sample Chapters
youwriteon.com – want to know the worst about your first 7000 words? Here's the place to find out. Honest, unprejudiced feedback from randomly assigned readers who rate you on all aspects of your writing.

Authonomy – Harper-Collins's online slush-pile. It will eat your life but you'll learn what you're up against and understand what it feels like to be an editor faced with thousands of manuscripts.

Easy, right?